"It is hidden in the basement of a
commercial building, if you're not from
local or a
regular, you would have never
known there is such a great steakhouse. Even from outside the building, the steakhouse sign is inconspicuous; you would have easily
overseen it from the busy street of Taichung Port Road. "HungPing" Steak is very good, and its live music is also
cheerful, but the only thing unsatisfying is the steak weighs about 6 ounces
only with an expensive price.
But I would still suggest you try it out though."
肉絲大 不好意思依照你的翻譯做了些小修正(紅色的位置)
1. commercial 指商業, business 比較像生意, 商業區-commercial zone
2. local 比較口語化
3. insider感覺有點直接用中文翻過來, regular 指的是常客, 我覺得比較適合用在本文. insider英文解釋比較像消息靈通的人
4. known(完成式)
5. overseen(完成式)
6. tasteful很少用來形容音樂(但用在形容女人就很ok
) , 我覺得用cheerful會比較適合
7. size指的是大小, 但文中用重量形容牛排, 所以用"weigh"這個單字
8. only有加強語氣的效果
9. but有加強語氣的效果
以上小小建議 若有冒犯 尚請見諒
