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標題: [哈拉] 有人英文不錯的嗎 [列印本頁]

作者: cea00519 時間: 2012-3-30 09:57 AM 標題: 有人英文不錯的嗎

因為外國客人來台灣
我們幫他處理了兩天的旅遊行程
我們貼心的要把行程一一的介紹給他知道
順便讓他知道台灣的美~

但是我卡關了

我被分配到翻譯這一段:18
請問有誰比較利害的可以幫我翻譯嗎??

"它隱身在一棟商業大樓的地下一樓，
如果不是內行人或在地的台中人可能不知道這裡面有那麼一家好吃的牛排館，
甚至大樓外的招牌也非常不顯眼，
就算在車水馬龍的中港路上還是很容易被忽略
泓品的牛排不錯吃
而且有live演唱聽還不錯
不過唯一我覺得不能滿足我的是
牛排份量真少,大約只有6oz,
價格也挺高的
不過還是建議去吃看看"

作者: 肉絲 時間: 2012-3-30 10:15 AM

"它隱身在一棟商業大樓的地下一樓，
如果不是內行人或在地的台中人可能不知道這裡面有那麼一家好吃的牛排館，
甚至大樓外的招牌也非常不顯眼，
就算在車水馬龍的中港路上還是很容易被忽略
泓品的牛排不錯吃
而且有live演唱聽還不錯
不過唯一我覺得不能滿足我的是
牛排份量真少,大約只有6oz,
價格也挺高的
不過還是建議去吃看看"

"It is hidden in the basement of a business building, if you're not from Taichung or an insider, you would have never know there is such a great steakhouse. Even from outside the building, the steakhouse sign is inconspicuous; you would have easily oversee it from the busy street of Taichung Port Road. "HungPing" Steak is very good, and its live music is also tasteful, but the only thing unsatisfying is the steak size is about 6 ounces also with an expensive price. I would still suggest you try it out though."

下次就收你錢

作者: JosephW 時間: 2012-3-30 10:26 AM

雖然翻的有點台式英文，有幾個錯誤
但我想那老外應該勉強可以懂

作者: 肉絲 時間: 2012-3-30 10:33 AM

I am offended, please show us o' master

作者: Kukalaja 時間: 2012-3-30 10:38 AM

"It is hidden in the basement of a commercial building, if you're not from local or a regular, you would have never known there is such a great steakhouse. Even from outside the building, the steakhouse sign is inconspicuous; you would have easily overseen it from the busy street of Taichung Port Road. "HungPing" Steak is very good, and its live music is also cheerful, but the only thing unsatisfying is the steak weighs about 6 ounces only with an expensive price. But I would still suggest you try it out though."

肉絲大不好意思依照你的翻譯做了些小修正(紅色的位置)
1. commercial 指商業, business 比較像生意, 商業區-commercial zone
2. local 比較口語化
3. insider感覺有點直接用中文翻過來, regular 指的是常客, 我覺得比較適合用在本文. insider英文解釋比較像消息靈通的人
4. known(完成式)
5. overseen(完成式)
6. tasteful很少用來形容音樂(但用在形容女人就很ok